Well, I did it! I went back because it just didn't feel right. Something was missing and I couldn't put my finger on it but there was no way I could start into Chapter 11 until I fixed it. So I spent the last 4 days watching tv and romance movies and staring at my chapter until I had a minor epiphany of sorts as I thought about some of my favorite romance books. Some of the best moments in them are built when the two characters aren't talking to each other but rather to other people about each other. What's a good slow burn build up without some embarrassing friend teasing on the side. And to top it off, I achieved my word count too! Wins all around. Any guesses as to what restaurant our characters decided to have their luncheon at? Okay, that's a really open ended question. I'll narrow it down for you. It's one I've always wanted to try in Pittsburgh and it's a veritable melting pot of incredible atmosphere and food. That was actually a pretty good hint if you can find it. Put your guesses in the comments!
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